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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that having these people to give a talk to school students is the best way to tell them about the dangers of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether ex-prisoners, which became a helpful member of society, could discourage teenagers from breaking a law or there are more effective ways to keep young
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 I will discuss both sides using examples from the latest research to demonstrate points and prove arguments. The main reason one should take into consideration is that
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 way, ex-prisoners could impress school students with his story. If he has told what led him to the accident step by step, why he has made
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 choice, it helped them realise the main reason which might lead to committing a crime and prison in the end and how they destroy their own future by those accidents in the context of their
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 integration in normal society I think it is not a bad way to expand your worldview. But the other side of the coin is that it is necessary to accurately choose these
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 really have understood their guilt, how much pain they have brought. If they will tell their story with a romantic or brave side it could have the opposite effect. In conclusion, from the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that
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 because we trust them the most valuable thing that we have is our children.
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