You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain in connection with some issues I am experiencing in the
room
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allotted to me in the university hostel. As I am sharing the half place with another guy who is ill-mannered and noisy all the time that disturbs me while studying. I am unable to stay in my own
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for a longer period due to his presence.
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, the bed which we share in common is quite small for the huge body physic of my
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room-mate
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, it causes me discomfort to sleep at night.
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, his habit of eating non-vegetarian food every day has spread an intolerable fishy smell inside the
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which triggers me by generating a sense of nausea. The major problem is the loud-speaking method that he follows while reading. All
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activity indirectly affects my academic output as I am not able to concentrate on my studies. To sustain in
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environment throughout my study duration is an arduous task for me to survive. I would like to request you to allow me to switch to another
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having a vegetarian partner to avoid
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health issues in the future.
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, I personally require a separate bed to sleep in to keep myself active by sleeping properly in a spacious area. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jhalak
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation officer
  • roommate
  • share a room
  • living arrangement
  • difficult to work
  • noise levels
  • study environment
  • privacy concerns
  • alternative accommodation
  • single room
  • academic performance
  • well-being
  • respectfully request
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