Learning out the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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words has always been opinable among the populations. Some people
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that learning from events that happened in the past is irrelevant.
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with
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, in one of his famous
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stated: "If you know your
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then
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am completely agree
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with
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sentence since it helps to understand the importance of
history
in the modern days.
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, learning from the past generally helps us to avoid repeating the same mistakes twice even though it is not always the case and there is not guaranteed
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success.
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history
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an
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old, irrelevant events that happen in the past.
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, many successful people
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often
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background in order to well know how to deal with people.
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history
often answers many questions
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life, what brings us here and how we have achieved what we have at present. A recent
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conducted by the
history
University in Washington Dc explain
for example
, how todays Covid-19 pandemic could have been avoided if we looked at the past devastating viruses in the
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-eval era and how they fought the infections.
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why
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am completely disagree
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with the question
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and why in my opinion
history
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important
subject that everyone should have a
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of.
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