Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often said that
,
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music
is the connecting bridge between different society, age
groups and even countries too. I do agree with the writer
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elaborate
this
essay that how music
play
a major role.
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plays
To begin
with, music
has neutral
communication path for all the cultures in the world. if Correct article usage
a neutral
enhace
the soal's deepest though and express in melodious voices and songs which accumulate all the people, whether he or she from any region or religion. Correct your spelling
enhance
For example
, India has number
of states which have their own thinking process, rituals, cultures; Change the article
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however
, it collabrate
all person's in Correct your spelling
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a single
In addition
, one music
director can unite all types of professionals from various cities of country
or nations and compose a fabulous sound which can put us in mood
of swing.
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the mood
a mood
Furthermore
, there is no age
limit to listen
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music
, although
different age
people enjoy their songs with any age
group person. Besides
, it is frequently noticed that even if you am from any country
, but you like any nation's music
or song, and you can enjoy it with any range of age
person. For Instance
, when we go for visiting any European country
where numberous
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numerous
age
of citizen which rejuvenate our mood and joined all toghether
.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
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Music
does not have any barrier in terms of culture, country
, religious
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age
. It is the defination
of unity. Correct your spelling
definition
Therefore
, I believe that,
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music
is kind of way to attach everyone with their province and customs without any restriction.Submitted by pateljigneshn on
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