Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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,
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music
is the connecting bridge between different society,
age
groups and even countries too. I do agree with the
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statement and I will
eloborate
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elaborate

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in
this
essay that how
music
play
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a major role.
To begin
with,
music
has
neutral
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communication path for all the cultures in the world. if
enhace
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enhance

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the soal's deepest though and express in melodious voices and songs which accumulate all the people, whether he or she from any region or religion.
For example
, India has
number
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of states which have their own thinking process, rituals, cultures;
however
, it
collabrate
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collaborate

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all person's in
single
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the single
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bridge.
In addition
, one
music
director can unite all types of professionals from various cities of
country
or nations and compose a fabulous sound which can put us in
mood
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the mood
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of swing.
Furthermore
, there is no
age
limit to
listen
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the
music
,
although
different
age
people enjoy their songs with any
age
group person.
Besides
, it is frequently noticed that even if you am from any
country
, but you like any nation's
music
or song, and you can enjoy it with any range of
age
person.
For Instance
, when we go for visiting any European
country
where
numberous
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numerous

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clubs running with enhanced sound system but we do visit that place and participate in dancing with their culture and any
age
of citizen which rejuvenate our mood and joined all
toghether
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together

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. In conclusion,
Music
does not have any barrier in terms of culture,
country
,
religious
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,
age
. It is the
defination
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definition

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of unity.
Therefore
, I believe that
,
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apply

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music
is kind of way to attach everyone with their province and customs without any restriction.

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