You recently received a letter from a friend asking for your advice on whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why she will not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea Suggest the type of job that would be suitable.
Dear Sukh,
Hope you’re doing splendidly! I received your
letter
last
Friday and I was delighted while
reading your letter
as you have finished your Early Childhood Educator. I am writing this
letter
about the advice which you asked for regarding whether it is suitable for you to go to college or to get a job.
Firstly
, my advice is for you to get a job because you will not enjoy going to college because higher education in this
field needs 500 hours (about 3 weeks) of practicum training in daycare and you do not have any practice in this
field as well as
you did ample of theory work, and you will feel boring while
continuing your study.
However
, getting employment will be a better option for you as you will get to know about practical training in this
field as the work is totally different than theory and you need high practice and patience to handle children. In addition
to this
, you will earn enough money which will cover your expense of daily routine as well as
it will help you to save some money to spend on your studies at university.
There are plenty of jobs available for an early childhood educator as I know about some of the organizations who are hiring. I have noticed that Williow Brae needs an Early childhood educator, which will be a good option for you.
I hope this
letter
will help you decide to choose your future as well as
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Simi.Submitted by sirat
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to maintain clarity.
coherence cohesion
Be cautious with the length of sentences and try to use a mix of both complex and simple sentences.
task achievement
Expand on each point with clear examples or explanations to fully develop your ideas.
task achievement
Ensure you address all parts of the prompt evenly to maintain a balanced response.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,