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Music has always been and continue to be a universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With globalization, different cultures including all kinds of
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 have spread across the world. When we stay at home to appreciate a piece of exotic song, we cannot rate
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 as a universal
language
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 of
mankind
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.
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 essay will illustrate
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 viewpoint clearly.
To begin
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 with,
music
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 may not become a global
language
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 of the human being as it is a symbol of
culture
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. There are significantly diverse cultures in the world, which include colourful forms of
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. Every form of
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 definitely distinguishes itself from others.
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 means that it is hard to fully comprehend each kind of
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 from different cultural backgrounds with different styles, even if expressing a similar emotion of human beings.
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, in order to express the feeling of sorrow, the performance of GuQing, an ancient Chinese traditional instrument, may not be understood by western audiences without the oriental knowledge base, vice versa.
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, it is a misconception that
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 is a universal
language
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 of
mankind
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. The crucial factor is that western
culture
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 has been and continued to be the global mainstream
culture
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.
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 results in all kinds of musical styles that represent western civilization are popular, which have been making many people misunderstand that
music
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 is a common
language
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 of
mankind
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. Meanwhile, other kinds of
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 from non-mainstream cultures have been neglected for a long time,
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 as the Kung opera
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 a kind of antique and survived Chinese musical.
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 is a piece of obvious evidence to prove that not all
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 can be a common
language
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. In conclusion,
music
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 represents the diversity of
culture
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, but not a global
language
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 of
mankind
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. I strongly disagree with the viewpoint that
music
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 can be regarded as a common
language
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, but believe that
music
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 from western
culture
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 may be acceptable across the world.

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