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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion.

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Last
 decades new technology
have
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 a crucial impact on the life of human society and
computers
 are increasingly used for
education
. Some people believe
that is
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 positive trend, others argue about it. I think there are more advantages. On the
one
 hand, the three main positive aspects we can see.
Firstly
, the advantage is the
using
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 of
computers
 allows to improve the time managing.
For example
, now the communication between a teacher and a student can
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due
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 special computer program like ZOOM, and they definitely save commuting time.
Also
 using
computers
 can make the process of
education
 faster, because it is much easier to find out new information in computer searches, like GOOGLE.
Therefore
 it can be new opportunities to develop science and
education
.
Thirdly
,
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exchange of information by email allows
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to receive
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 the necessary information from different people incredibly fast.
On the other hand
, some disadvantages take place in that situation. The
first
one
 is the potential problems with health .
For instance
, the long working with
computers
 can provoke b illnesses of
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. eyes and overweight. The
second
one
 is
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reducing live communication.
As a result
, some
of
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teachers
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 can not explain the material as good as they want. In
conclusion
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 I would like to say in my opinion the using
computers
 in
education
 is
the
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one
 of the necessary things, and people, especially parents, should include physical activity and live communications in the process of
education
.
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