Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion.

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decades new technology
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a crucial impact on the life of human society and
computers
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are increasingly used for
education
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. Some people believe
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positive trend, others argue about it. I think there are more advantages. On the
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hand, the three main positive aspects we can see.
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, the advantage is the
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of
computers
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allows to improve the time managing.
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, now the communication between a teacher and a student can
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special computer program like ZOOM, and they definitely save commuting time.
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using
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can make the process of
education
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faster, because it is much easier to find out new information in computer searches, like GOOGLE.
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it can be new opportunities to develop science and
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,
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exchange of information by email allows
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to receive
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the necessary information from different people incredibly fast.
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, some disadvantages take place in that situation. The
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is the potential problems with health .
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, the long working with
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can provoke b illnesses of
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. eyes and overweight. The
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reducing live communication.
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, some
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teachers
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can not explain the material as good as they want. In
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I would like to say in my opinion the using
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in
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one
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of the necessary things, and people, especially parents, should include physical activity and live communications in the process of
education
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