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In some countries around the world men and women are having children later in life. What are reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

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Earlier days, people used to marry at an early
age
 of their life's and was giving
birth
 to
children
 at a young
age
.
However
, In Few, countries the trend has changed men and
women
 are giving more importance to their desires than giving life to babies.
This
 essay will discuss the causes of
this
 change and what are the impacts on society and family life. As I mentioned above, These days, the Young generation is much dependent to achieve their goals despite other things
such
 as marriage,
children
.
For Instance
, I was born, when my father was 22 and my mother was 20, but nowadays people are not having a child till more than 30.
In addition
 to
this
, those who are preferring late
birth
 most of them are Average income family's, they believe that, if they have sufficient needs before
birth
then
 they would be able to give whichever required for
children
.
therefore
, these are some reasons to think
children
 at a late
age
. though, men and
women
 quite comfortable at the primary level, eventually, they would see many impacts. as I have studied in different articles, when
women
age
 increases the conceives percentage as well decline,
Nevertheless
, I studied, 70 years old
women
 were given
birth
 to an infant in some other articles. another reason is might the child born with low immunity or handicap.so, they need to face so many problems from society if they born like that. In conclusion, People have late
children
 because to reach their targeted positions and overcome the financial situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • developments
  • adulthood
  • education
  • career
  • financial stability
  • ready
  • start a family
  • assisted reproductive technologies
  • personal fulfillment
  • self-development
  • improved healthcare
  • life expectancies
  • cultural factors
  • religious factors
  • access
  • birth control methods
  • responsibilities
  • challenges
  • parenthood
  • influence
  • media
  • popular culture
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