Human activity has had a negative impacts on plants and animals.Some people think that this cannot be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people argue that individual
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would have detrimental effects on fauna and animals while others say that nothing can be done about it. While these
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income for them, I believe that the government should authorize restriction laws that
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them to conform. On one hand, several individuals cut down trees from the forest to enable them
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income for
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and their families.
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is because so many people are unemployed so
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has created a form of work for them to be able to provide their basic amenities.
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,in recent times lots of young adults who just graduated from
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higher institution are without jobs.
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they have opted to start selling woods from trees in the local markets to make a living.
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no doubt has improved their standard of leaving which would not be possible if the act of pulling down trees were abolished.
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of measures that can be taken to ensure that human
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not cause a drawback effect.
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individuals should be prohibited by the laws implemented by the government.
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would cause anyone who
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fail
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abide by the law
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pay
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a fine.
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,awareness should be created for the public through the media
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as posters,television programmed and text messages sent to their mobile phones.
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,making them informed about the dangers of the
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carried out by them and the associated effect it would have on
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and plants. In conclusion,
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people are of the view that no amount of measures established can result in the abolishment of people’s involvements
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crop and animal creatures.I believe that the authorization of rules and regulations by the government can make a huge difference.
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