Human activity has had a negative impacts on plants and animals.Some people think that this cannot be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people argue that individual

activities

would have detrimental effects on fauna and animals while others say that nothing can be done about it. While these

activities

can

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income for them, I believe that the government should authorize restriction laws that

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them to conform. On one hand, several individuals cut down trees from the forest to enable them

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income for

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and their families.

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is because so many people are unemployed so

this

has created a form of work for them to be able to provide their basic amenities.

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,in recent times lots of young adults who just graduated from

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apply

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higher institution are without jobs.

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this

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they have opted to start selling woods from trees in the local markets to make a living.

This

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no doubt has improved their standard of leaving which would not be possible if the act of pulling down trees were abolished.

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,there

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number

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a number

the number

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of measures that can be taken to ensure that human

activities

does

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not cause a drawback effect.

Firstly

individuals should be prohibited by the laws implemented by the government.

This

would cause anyone who

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fails

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fail

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tofail

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abide by the law

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to pay

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pay

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a fine.

In addition

,awareness should be created for the public through the media

such

as posters,television programmed and text messages sent to their mobile phones.

However

,making them informed about the dangers of the

activities

carried out by them and the associated effect it would have on

livestock’s

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livestocks

livestock

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and plants. In conclusion,

although

people are of the view that no amount of measures established can result in the abolishment of people’s involvements

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crop and animal creatures.I believe that the authorization of rules and regulations by the government can make a huge difference.

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