Human activity has had a negative impacts on plants and animals.Some people think that this cannot be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people argue that individual
activities
would have detrimental effects on fauna and animals while others say that nothing can be done about it. While these
activities
can
generates
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income for them, I believe that the government should authorize restriction laws that
forces
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force

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them to conform. On one hand, several individuals cut down trees from the forest to enable them
generate
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to generate

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income for
them
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themselves

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and their families.
This
is because so many people are unemployed so
this
has created a form of work for them to be able to provide their basic amenities.
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,in recent times lots of young adults who just graduated from
the
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apply

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higher institution are without jobs.
As a result
of
this
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,this

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they have opted to start selling woods from trees in the local markets to make a living.
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in
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is

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no doubt has improved their standard of leaving which would not be possible if the act of pulling down trees were abolished.
On the other hand
,there
are
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is

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number
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a number
the number

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of measures that can be taken to ensure that human
activities
does
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do

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not cause a drawback effect.
Firstly
individuals should be prohibited by the laws implemented by the government.
This
would cause anyone who
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fails

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fail
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tofail

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abide by the law
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to pay

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pay
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pays

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a fine.
In addition
,awareness should be created for the public through the media
such
as posters,television programmed and text messages sent to their mobile phones.
However
,making them informed about the dangers of the
activities
carried out by them and the associated effect it would have on
livestock’s
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livestocks
livestock

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and plants. In conclusion,
although
people are of the view that no amount of measures established can result in the abolishment of people’s involvements
on
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in

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crop and animal creatures.I believe that the authorization of rules and regulations by the government can make a huge difference.

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