Human activity has had a negative impacts on plants and animals.Some people think that this cannot be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people argue that individual
activities
would have detrimental effects on fauna and animals while others say that nothing can be done about it. While these activities
can generates
income for them, I believe that the government should authorize restriction laws that Change the verb form
generate
forces
them to conform.
On one hand, several individuals cut down trees from the forest to enable them Change the verb form
force
generate
income for Add the particle
to generate
them
and their families. Correct pronoun usage
themselves
This
is because so many people are unemployed so this
has created a form of work for them to be able to provide their basic amenities. For instance
,in recent times lots of young adults who just graduated from the
higher institution are without jobs. Correct article usage
apply
As a result
of this
they have opted to start selling woods from trees in the local markets to make a living. Add a comma
,this
This
in
no doubt has improved their standard of leaving which would not be possible if the act of pulling down trees were abolished.
Correct your spelling
is
On the other hand
,there are
Change the verb form
is
number
of measures that can be taken to ensure that human Change the article
a number
the number
activities
does
not cause a drawback effect. Change the verb form
do
Firstly
individuals should be prohibited by the laws implemented by the government.This
would cause anyone who Change the verb form
fails
fail
abide by the law Add the particle
tofail
Fix the infinitive
to pay
pay
a fine. Change the verb form
pays
In addition
,awareness should be created for the public through the media such
as posters,television programmed and text messages sent to their mobile phones. However
,making them informed about the dangers of the activities
carried out by them and the associated effect it would have on livestock’s
and plants.
In conclusion,Change the noun form
livestocks
livestock
although
people are of the view that no amount of measures established can result in the abolishment of people’s involvements on
crop and animal creatures.I believe that the authorization of rules and regulations by the government can make a huge difference.Change preposition
in
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