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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the
use
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 of printed informative sources ,
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 as newspapers and books will become extinct due to the availability of all the
information
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 online for free. I, personally agree with the opinion that
people
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 will buy less printed books or newspapers in future,
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, the traditional method of printed papers would not escape.
Also
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, everything available online would not be for free.
To begin
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 with,
although
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, I believe that the
use
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 of printed papers would decline because the online services these days are considered far more secure and fast than the traditional ways. The
information
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that is
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 stored online cannot be easily accessible by others, only the person with the exact password can have access to it. To illustrate, many government organisations and banks these days are encouraging
people
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 towards going paperless because of being secure. In spite of
this
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 secure system, many
people
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 from developing and undeveloped countries may not have access to it. As the financial condition of these countries may not allow the government to spend money to create a vast internet network. So, they would
use
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 printed papers to keep their
information
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.
This
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 online
information
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 may not be free and
people
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 would have to pay some charges for
this
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 service. As staff is needed to maintain and update the online resources from reliable resources. If there would be no revenue in
this
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 job
then
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 nobody would come forward to work in
this
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 sector.
For example
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, various journalists and other staff members are required to update daily news online .
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, some of the
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 presents online would be charged. To conclude, I believe that the
use
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 of printed newspapers and books would decline in the near future buy it would be still in
use
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 by some.
Also
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, some
information
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 available online would not be for free.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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