Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city •suggest a few jobs that your friend could do •give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

Hi Sarah, I hope

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letter finds you well. Recently, I heard from Joe that you are moving to Australia for

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6 months for work. I hope to see you soon as I have a bunch of ideas to enjoy with you. As you know, I am currently living in the city of Sydney. My place will be near

Wynyard

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the Wynyard

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suburb.

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suburb is popular for its nightlife

entertainment

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and entertainment

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the

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apartments

may look

old-fashion

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but

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apply

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the interior of them

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constructed in modern styles. You can go to a famous and convenient restaurant where everyone is dying for their beef burgers. There are a bunch of job opportunities in

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suburb. You should look into Seek to find a job

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your profession. Most businesses use

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site to hire experienced individuals. I am pretty confident you can find a job that suits you. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Sincerely, Kim

kimtatt.tan97

Jan 15, 2025

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Provide a brief introduction or conclusion for a more complete response.

task achievement

Include more details about job opportunities beyond the use of the 'Seek' website.

suitable writing tone

The letter establishes a warm and friendly tone throughout.

logical structure

Paragraphs are logically structured and address specific parts of the task prompt.

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing are appropriate for a friendly letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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Write a letter to a friend who will come to your country to work for 6 months. In your letter, you should: •recommend a city •suggest a few jobs that your friend could do •give some opinions about making friends with the locals.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. The only people Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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