Most young people leave school with a negative attitude toward learning. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done to encourage them to have a positive attitude?

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the education level of the young generation is higher than before, most of them hold a negative attitude towards study

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after graduation. Some possible reasons

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issue will be analyzed and suggested in

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essay. There are three main reasons for

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case, the essential one of which is that teachers and parents have distorted recognition of formal education. In their views, the object of acquiring academic knowledge, participating in community activities or competition is for achieving better grades that are prerequisites when

appplying

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applying

for the prestigious university or decent

job

positions. Unfortunately, the result is often contrary to their expectations. There seems no indispensable relation between higher salary and diploma; the admission of

first-tier

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university and a good GPA, which has been proved by the examples of senior

students

who are still struggling with

competitiors

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competitors

competition

in the

job

market or undertaking a

job

with

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payment. The

second

reason lies in the examination-oriented assessment system. Tests are widely used as the sole way to evaluate the learning process, which enormously demotivates

students

who are not

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testing.

Last

but not least, some

students

are forced to choose subjects that less interest them. In order to increase the possibility of attaining a stable

job

, they may

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major

in engineering or medicine though art or

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is their sincere pursuit. There are several

pratices

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practices

practise

practice

and actions

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be applied to reverse the negative attitude to learning.

First

of all, the development of personal

all-round

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ability should be emphasized. Apart from scores of exams,

students

' aesthetic appreciation, athletic ability and moral integrity are supposed to be

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items of assessment.

In addition

, it is

neccessary

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necessary

for

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government

goverment

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to promote the diversity of industries. Public funding or tax revenues can be allocated to support the artistic programs or archaeology which may have less

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with economic growth but are ideals for certain

students

. In conclusion, it is one's attitude that determines her success. Only when

students

have enthusiasm about learning can they benefit from the knowledge they accumulated and

skills

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they mastered.