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Many museums charge for the entries while others are free? Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission for museum outweigh disadvantages?

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Many
museums
 around the world are imposing
fees
 for the visit but some of it waives their entry
fees
 for the visitors.
Museum
are
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cultural
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a cultural
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 heritage for every country and
also
 it is transmitting the history of ancestors to
next
 generation. I am inclined to believe the merits of charging the public for the permit is far outweigh its demerits.
To begin
 with, most people at least have visited the
museum
 once in their lifetime. It is a proud symbol of the culture and customs of indigenous society.
Therefore
, every
museum
 should preserve and maintain to the core. If
museums
 are charged for entry, which can limit the visitors, and eventually it can be prevented from exploitation. Many famous tourist attractions have already been damaged by overcrowded
travelers
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.
Furthermore
, ancient monuments and antique arts in the
museum
 need to be kept intact. The preservation techniques cost thousands of dollars annually. The maintenance cost would be a burden for the government.
Instead
, the charged entrance
fees
 for the visitor can utilize for
it's
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 expenditures.
However
, the payment for the visitors could inhibit the arrival of local people.
Thus
 the young
populatuon
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population
 in the locality would not be able to know the culture, inherited arts and other forms of traditions.  To conclude, charging
fees
 for the viewers in
museums
 will minimize the visitor and
therefore
 it can be prevented from exploitation.
Hence
 the benefits of entry
fees
 of
museums
 outweigh the drawbacks.
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