In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the
use
of informative sources,
such
as newspapers and
books
will become extinct due to
availability
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the availability

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of all the
information
online for free. In my opinion, I agree with the argument that people will buy
less
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fewer

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printed
books
or newspapers in future,
however
, the traditional method of printed papers would not escape.
Also
, everything available online would not be for free.
To begin
with,
although
I believe that the
use
of printed paper would decline because the online services these days are considered far more diverse and fast than the traditional ways. The
information
that is
provided online can be diverse, easily classified and edited by
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. For scholars,
for instance
, make the researches would be great if there are expanding the available
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data

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resources. In spite of
this
advantege
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, many
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still refer to the printed
books
as may
not
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every
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have access to upload to the internet. As the condition and requirement are various, they would
use
the printed
books
to keep their records or collection.
This
online
information
may not be free and people would have to pay some charges for
this
service. As staff is needed to maintain and update the online
resouces
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. If there would be no revenue in
this
job
then
nobody would come forward to work in
this
sector.
For example
, various publishers and other staff members are required to update daily news online.
Hence
, some of the
information
presents online would be charged. To conclude, I believe that the
use
of printed newspapers and
books
would decline in the near future but it would be still in
use
by some.
Also
, some
information
available online would not be free.
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