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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that the
use
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 of informative sources,
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 as newspapers and
books
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 will become extinct due to
availability
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the availability
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 of all the
information
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 online for free. In my opinion, I agree with the argument that people will buy
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 printed
books
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 or newspapers in future,
however
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, the traditional method of printed papers would not escape.
Also
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, everything available online would not be for free.
To begin
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although
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 I believe that the
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 of printed paper would decline because the online services these days are considered far more diverse and fast than the traditional ways. The
information
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that is
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 provided online can be diverse, easily classified and edited by
reader
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the reader
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. For scholars,
for instance
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, make the researches would be great if there are expanding the available
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data
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date
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 resources. In spite of
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advantege
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advantage
, many
researches
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researchers
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 still refer to the printed
books
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 as may
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 every
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 have access to upload to the internet. As the condition and requirement are various, they would
use
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 the printed
books
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 to keep their records or collection.
This
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 online
information
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 may not be free and people would have to pay some charges for
this
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 service. As staff is needed to maintain and update the online
resouces
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resources
resource
 from reliable
resouces
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resources
resource
. If there would be no revenue in
this
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 job
then
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 nobody would come forward to work in
this
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 sector.
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, various publishers and other staff members are required to update daily news online.
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, some of the
information
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 presents online would be charged. To conclude, I believe that the
use
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 of printed newspapers and
books
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 would decline in the near future but it would be still in
use
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 by some.
Also
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, some
information
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 available online would not be free.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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