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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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Going for a vacation in our own nation and not visiting overseas for a holiday will be a point of argument amongst a large number of individuals in the coming time.
This
 essay disagrees with the idea of exploring our own country
instead
 of travelling abroad for a tour in future. Increasing demand for tourism due to advancement in technology and for personal interest
such
 as gaining knowledge about cross-culture will be the possibilities.
To begin
 with, significant advancement in technology is happening every now and
then
 like flights are reducing the travel time from one country to another at a cheaper price, as a ,
result
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 humans are encouraged to go overseas on their vacations.
In addition
, it’s a matter of pride for them when opting for an international trip
instead
 of a domestic trip which will
further
 increase in the coming time. For an instance, the moment the pandemic situation got better in 2021, most of the public opted for international destinations at cheaper flight tickets.
Furthermore
,
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 are
also
 keen to fulfil their personal desires like gaining knowledge about other cultures, languages, cuisines etcetera broadens their horizon towards life.
This
 mindset of the major population is going to increase in future as humans are becoming more and more inclined towards their own desires and interests.
For example
, a multilingual employee always gets more importance as compared to others while dealing with foreign delegates. To conclude ,
eventually
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 people would be more inclined towards visiting other countries as compared to their own because of technology facilitating our cost-effective tours and
also
 in order to fulfil their personal desires or goals.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • domestic tourism
  • international travel
  • cultural exchange
  • national pride
  • affordability
  • convenience
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • local businesses
  • comfort zone
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