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CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

#children #parents’ #advice
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Some people say that following
parents
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 consultation is always a must for
children
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. Even though
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 is not practical all the time, I agree with
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 statement to some extent. There are many reasons why
parents
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'
advice
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 need to be followed by their offsprings. The foremost reason is
parents
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 are the best well-wishers for their
children
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. Only
parents
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 know what is best and what is suitable for their kids.
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, they are very capable and suitable for giving
advice
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, which is worthy and priceless.
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,
Parents
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 have had vast experience in life and its effect on their future generations.
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 will
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 make a good impact on the decision-making process. these will be helpful in many crucial future decisions.
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, it is common to see that,
children
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 who followed their
parents
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'
advice
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 were more successful in their life.
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, some father and mother are not updated with the current phase of development and technology. Sometimes, they lack behind in the thinking process as well. These reasons push them backwards in the thinking process.
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 their
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also
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 not reliable to current problems faced by their own son and daughter.
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parents
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 with poor understanding about information technology can not have the ability make the decision about their
children
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's preference over these subject for their study.
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, for problems like these, we need relevant field related peoples'
advice
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 ,not
parents
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advice
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. In conclusion, I believe as the
parents
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 are the true mentors for their
children
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, it is necessary to
children
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 to follow their
parents
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'
advice
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 where it is reliable and suitable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • crucial
  • life lessons
  • best interests
  • life experience
  • understanding
  • challenges
  • invaluable
  • independence
  • critical thinking
  • relying solely
  • hinder
  • beliefs
  • desires
  • generational changes
  • rapid pace
  • social and technological changes
  • outdated
  • applicable
  • digital age
  • necessitating
  • balance
  • tradition
  • modernity
  • deeply ingrained
  • value
  • evolve
  • honoring
  • deviating
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