A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear James,
We haven’t had a meeting since we graduated
in
high school. I am really Change preposition
from
delightful
to arrange a meeting if you have a spare time. I received your email about Replace the word
delighted
take
on vacation Change the verb form
taking
in
Change preposition
apply
this
summer, and I really
happy to share Add a missing verb
am really
Change preposition
with you
you
some tips.
Let me begin with, Cỏ Hồng hill is the best choice to set a plan for camping in Dalat. It is Correct pronoun usage
apply
tranquil
place surrounded by natural spectacles as well as good-hearted and supportive inhabitants living here. The Add an article
a tranquil
second
why
you should go camping Correct your spelling
way
that
the weather is really wonderful with blue sky to avoid the polluted environment from Add a missing verb
is that
Add an article
the center
center
of Change the spelling
centre
metropolis
. Add an article
the metropolis
a metropolis
In addition
, this
place have
many Change the verb form
has
of
thrilling activities Change preposition
apply
hence
you should participate to explore new things which we have never experienced including skydiving, mountain biking and so on. It is able to help you to
Change preposition
apply
unwine
after your hectic schedules. Correct your spelling
unwind
Specially
,You do not forget to bring your camera to capture beautiful natural scenery.
Replace the word
Especially
By contrast
, it is worth noting that the weather condition constantly changes. Therefore
, you need to check the weather forecast. Simultaneously, you must to
bring your jacket , gloves and scarf. Change the verb form
apply
This
is due to that
fact that the temperatures can get as low as 10 degrees at night Correct determiner usage
the
although
it is the summer. Apart from this
drawback, everything is great.
I hope you have a
exciting vacation with your buddies. Honestly, I am looking forward to Change the article
an
see
you as soon as possible.
Best regards,
My PhuongChange the verb form
seeing
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