A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear James, We haven’t had a meeting since we graduated

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high school. I am really

delightful

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to arrange a meeting if you have a spare time. I received your email about

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on vacation

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summer, and I

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happy to share

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some tips. Let me begin with, Cỏ Hồng hill is the best choice to set a plan for camping in Dalat. It is

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place surrounded by natural spectacles as well as good-hearted and supportive inhabitants living here. The

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why

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you should go camping

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the weather is really wonderful with blue sky to avoid the polluted environment from

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center

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of

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.

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place

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many

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thrilling activities

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you should participate to explore new things which we have never experienced including skydiving, mountain biking and so on. It is able to help you

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unwine

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unwind

after your hectic schedules.

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,You do not forget to bring your camera to capture beautiful natural scenery.

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, it is worth noting that the weather condition constantly changes.

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, you need to check the weather forecast. Simultaneously, you must

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bring your jacket , gloves and scarf.

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fact that the temperatures can get as low as 10 degrees at night

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it is the summer. Apart from

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drawback, everything is great. I hope you have

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exciting vacation with your buddies. Honestly, I am looking forward to

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you as soon as possible. Best regards, My Phuong