The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that having a

job

with a high salary is more

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advantageous

than having to work

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a field that does not appeal to you at all.

Nevertheless

, I strongly disagree with

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claim and think that

job

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satisfaction

is by far the main aspect to consider when choosing

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employment

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.

Firstly

, being happy with the chosen occupation will provide individuals with a sense of

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than

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any money can guarantee.

Therefore

, pursuing one's dreams will always bring sheer happiness and a feeling of satisfaction, rather than having to work for merely monetary interests that certainly will bring frustration and prevent

people

from the enjoyment of life.

For instance

, most

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artists

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chose their career

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for economic reasons but based upon their passions and talents.

Thus

, it is greatly superior

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bliss of having

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desired

job

than

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only working for money.

Secondly

,

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performing

a

job

that humans really enjoy, provides a high level of motivation and productivity which

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might

lead to

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career growth.

That is

to say, there is a strong correlation

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between

job

satisfcation

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satisfaction

and productivity. Those who enjoy what they are doing

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will exceed the results expected

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others who put the salary in the

first

place.

For example

, many

people

leave their well-paid jobs to become what they have always dreamt and after ups and downs, normally they become the most successful

people

in their fields.

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of jobs that keep humans satisfied

outweight

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outweigh

the drawbacks of having a lower income in a long-time perspective. To conclude, I completely agree that

job

satisfaction has

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enormous positive impact on

people

's lives because it brings

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happiness

and motivation.