Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.

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Dear Johnny, I’m writing to let you know that my elder sister is getting married in the coming month where the responsibility to organize the music has

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to me and I’d be really grateful if you could join us in the program. I’d be more than happy if you could perform at the wedding ceremony because I’ve seen your performance at the annual function in our college and it was outstanding. More specifically, the country song at the very beginning of the occasion and the DJ work at the end by you and your team was fantastic. You’re connected with my family from our childhood, so everybody will be more comfortable watching your act rather than an unknown artist.

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, we could arrange the schedule collaboratively in a convenient way so I couldn’t think

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else best suited for

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like to offer a handsome amount of money for

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work to you because I would cost

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if I could arrange anybody for the program. And offering you is much better than anybody else. Best wishes, Shohada

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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