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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday live. Is it a positive or negative development?

#advertisements #development
The issue of
growing
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the growing
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 tendency of advertising to the
mordern
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modern
live
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life
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 has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that
,
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apply
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 advertisement
bring
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brings
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 a lot of benefit to both businesses and
customers
.
On the other hand
, others
insits
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insist
insists
 on the opinion that advertising increases the cost of the advertised
products
. Viewing from my perspectives, I
personnally
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personally
 think that advertisement has both advantages and disadvantages.
To begin
 with, advertisement becomes an inevitable tool for
company
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the company
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.
Firstly
, advertising creates corporate brand value by creating contents and logos.
For example
, the popular Nike’ Just Do It slogan has attracted a lot of
customers
 to buy their shoes so that their sales and profits have increased significantly.
Secondly
,
Customers
 could know the information of new-launched
products
 and have more choices for the demand.
For instance
, Nike’ company has released variety
products
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of products
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such
 as shoes for lifestyle or sports to meet the needs
customers
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of customers
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 and promoting
this
 on
website
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the website
a website
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 to help
custom
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customers
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 get
clearly
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clear
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 details of
products
.
Finally
, advertising generates many job opportunities
such
 as content creator,
designer
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a designer
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 so that it reduces the unemployment rate in the
word
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world
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.
On the contrary
, other people think that the cost of commercial
activies
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activities
 is expensive so that customer has to bear high prices when they buy the advertised
products
.
However
, most customer nowadays
find
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finds
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 out the information and select the new product through advertising. In conclusion,
advertisements
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advertisement
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is
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are
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 a form of modern business that every company needs and get
customers
have
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 the best choices with high qualified product
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