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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday live. Is it a positive or negative development?

#advertisements #development
The issue of the growing tendency of advertising
to
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the
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modern life has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that
,
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advertisement
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the advertisement
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 brings a lot of benefit to both businesses and client.
On the other hand
, others
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 on the opinion that advertising increases the cost of the advertised commodity. Viewing from my perspectives, I personally think that
advertisement
 has both advantages and disadvantages.
To begin
 with,
advertisement
 becomes an inevitable tool for the company.
Firstly
, advertising creates corporate brand value by creating contents and logos.
For example
, the popular Nike’ Just Do It slogan has attracted a lot of
purchaser
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to buy their shoes so that their sales and profits have increased significantly.
Secondly
,
customer
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the customer
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 could know the information of new-launched
product
 and have more choices for the demand.
For instance
, Nike’ company has released
variety
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 of products
such
 as shoes for lifestyle or sports to meet the needs of customers and promoting
this
 on the website to help customers get clear details of the
product
.
Finally
, advertising generates many job opportunities
such
 as content creator, a designer so that it reduces the unemployment rate in the world.
On the contrary
, other people think that the cost of commercial activities is expensive so that customer has to bear high prices when they buy the advertised brand.
However
, most customer nowadays finds out the information and select the new
product
 through advertising. In conclusion,
advertisement
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 is a form of modern business that every company needs and get customers to have the best choices with high qualified
product
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