Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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,instance
Facebook
, have been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that these sites have been proving Use synonyms
its
beneficial effect to Correct pronoun usage
their
an individuals
in term of providing a variety Correct the article-noun agreement
individuals
an individual
tool
for communication and connection. Change preposition
of tool
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information
leaking for social communities have been Use synonyms
threathen
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threatened
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a hacker
the hacker
general
perspectively, I personally agree with the former opinion Correct article usage
a general
by
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for
following
reasons.
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the following
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people
from all over the world can communicate with each other by using social media. Use synonyms
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people
use Use synonyms
Facebook
to make friends so that we can have at least 5000 friends on our friend list which is so hard for one person to reach out Use synonyms
many
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to many
friend
in reality. Change to a plural noun
friends
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the
students abroad can use Correct article usage
apply
Facebook
to keep in touch with their family. Use synonyms
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people
can update news and Use synonyms
information
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Facebook
to exchange Use synonyms
variety
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a variety
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of studying
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hard
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a hard
game
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the game
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Facebook
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help
us to release our pressure and stress.
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helps
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apply
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people
worried that the threat of being hacked their Add an article
the people
information
. Hacker can use personal Use synonyms
information
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Facebook
. Use synonyms
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these threat
by not posting much personal on social networking sites. We can Change the determiner
this threat
these threats
also
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Facebook
to promote our business Use synonyms
through
selling product on it.
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by
Facebook
and social media tools have Use synonyms
positive
impact Add an article
a positive
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mankind which have been by far outweighed the disadvantages.Change preposition
on
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