Some people think that sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The issue of a

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of

competition

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in

children

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has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that

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is the

instinct

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that should be encouraged because it helps

children

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be independent and have a clear target in their life.

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, others insist on the opinion that competitive

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will make

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become violent and they can feel lonely sometimes.

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essay will discuss both viewpoints and I hereby follow the former opinion

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the following reasons.

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with, a lot of advantages can be seen when infant have a

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of

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.

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, when they learn how to be alone, they are independent and have a strong mindset,

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they are able to confront difficulties in real life.

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, when

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know what they are competing for, they have a clear target in their life.

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, a child wants to get marks better than other students in class when they have studied abroad target.

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,

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instinct

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practises

children

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have a cold head so they can make appropriate decisions in future.

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, some people claim that the

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of

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make

children

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be more violent and they can lose their relationship and be lonely.

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, a child fights with his friend because of food, and when they grow up, they use violence to resolve the conflicts

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of words.

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, we can not live without the

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of

competition

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, and we use

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in the right way it can become a very useful tool. In fact, almost successful people have a very strong

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of

competition

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. In conclusion,

children

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should be encouraged to learn the competitive

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in the early days.