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(2024) You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do give me transcript and bands

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you about the function error I am facing
while
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 using the
printer
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. The HP
printer
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 was given to me by the company.
Although
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 I never faced any difficulties using it, since I started using it recently, the
printer
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 refuses to print any colour documents. When I try to print the data or a chart which
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 colour, the
printer
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 only prints it
as
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 black & white. As my presentation papers require colour, it is essential to highlight the visual elements with colours.
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, I am facing the due date for my project for which I require coloured prints. Owing to the bad condition of the
printer
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, I would
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 able to meet the deadline. I would appreciate it if you send a repair man to resolve the issue. If
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 not possible, please give me
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permission to work at the office for
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a few
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 days. Yours sincerely, Jojo

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task achievement
Consider providing more detail about the specific issues with your printer, such as error messages or the model number.
coherence and cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on one clear idea; this will enhance clarity.
suitable writing tone
The letter is polite and maintains an appropriate tone throughout.
complete response
You clearly state the problem and its impact on your work, which is crucial for the task.
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