Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In the modern era,  

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are better at

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care than males.

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, the

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concentrate mostly on the growing

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and fewer

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in their working profession. I agree with the statement and

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I will explain some examples in the below paragraphs with a proper conclusion.

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, in our country, most  

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's study up to 12th grade. After completion their of, studies they will get married with the help of their parents. After marriage, they enjoy sexual life with their husbands.

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, after nine months they get pregnant and

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give birth to a

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and

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later they feed their breast milk to the

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to stay healthy. Because of

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reason,

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mainly stay at home and feed their

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properly like food, milking, etc.,

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, one of my sisters completed his studies and after the completion of studies she gets married to a software employee and after nine months she got pregnant and

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she gave birth to a

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, now she was feeding food to his

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.

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,  most families have a rule that males should go out and work. Whereas

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must and should stay at home

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,

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have the best talent in how to raise children rather than male. In

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case, many

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get their jobs after graduation, they leave their

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and profession because they particularly concentrate on their family and their children. For exemplify, one of my aunties  completed his B. Tech in a college at GITAM University. She got a

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in a company 'WIPRO' and later she left the

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because of her children and husband. To Conclude, in our country, most

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would study up to 12th grade due to

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they won't have proper skill to work.

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,

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get their

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after completing the course but they leave the

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because of their family.