Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a great number of people believe that
children
can be educated at home rather than in schools, due to the vast amount of information that is
now available online. While it is argued by some that this
trend has a positive effect, because of the fact that intimate environment can provide more confidence to some children
, I completely disagree and think that parents without formal training should not teach their own children
.
On the one hand, some argue that studying in a known and comfortable place can help certain children
to progress more easily. Some children
are shy and have low self-esteem and thus
may feel more comfortable to learn
in a quiet and non-competitive atmosphere. Change the verb form
learning
For example
, in a class of 40 students, there will always be several students that will know the answer more quickly than others. A slower learner may find this
environment difficult to cope with.
On the other hand
, In my opinion, children
should be educated only at schools, due to the fact that parents are often not capable of providing their children
with good
education. Teachers are Add an article
a good
proffesional
workers who possess the knowledge and experience on how to educate youngsters, as oppose to parents without any formal training. Correct your spelling
professional
For instance
, A father who
himself suffer from problems with concentration will not be able to educate his Change the pronoun
whom
children
properly.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that children
should not be educated at home and must attend school, due to the fact that teachers are the only ones who have the ability to teach young learners in the right way.Submitted by nimrod.dar on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite