Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a great number of people believe that

children

can be educated at home rather than in schools, due to the vast amount of information

that is

now available online. While it is argued by some that

this

trend has a positive effect, because of the fact that intimate environment can provide more confidence to some

children

, I completely disagree and think that parents without formal training should not teach their own

children

. On the one hand, some argue that studying in a known and comfortable place can help certain

children

to progress more easily. Some

children

are shy and have low self-esteem and

thus

may feel more comfortable

to learn

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in a quiet and non-competitive atmosphere.

For example

, in a class of 40 students, there will always be several students that will know the answer more quickly than others. A slower learner may find

this

environment difficult to cope with.

On the other hand

, In my opinion,

children

should be educated only at schools, due to the fact that parents are often not capable of providing their

children

with

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education. Teachers are

proffesional

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professional

workers who possess the knowledge and experience on how to educate youngsters, as oppose to parents without any formal training.

For instance

, A father

who

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himself suffer from problems with concentration will not be able to educate his

children

properly. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

children

should not be educated at home and must attend school, due to the fact that teachers are the only ones who have the ability to teach young learners in the right way.