Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

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believes that
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your office and house to be kept neat, clean and well
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manner is the main focus of our
first
task in a day. I do agree with the written statement as it
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a vital role in our life in order to achieve something better.
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, as per
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some research it proved that tidy environment will boost your speed towards your
work
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and home, in a result we can complete our task efficiently and without delaying.
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,
messy
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workplace usually takes time to search
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documents or any important item from our personal room or house. We have experienced kind of problems in our life.
Therefore
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well organised
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place always save our time which can enhance our time management skill and it
also
helps us to build up our CV.
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, we have measured
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of times that, unorganised workplace affect us
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mentally
as well as physically as
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draw your major attention to search
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crucial uncompleted paper works which should be accomplished on
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timely
time
simply
.
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of my personal experience which based on my previous company where
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I found that one of a
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colleague
mostly run his business hours without cleaning his desk and majorly involve in searching for important official papers.
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, at the end of the
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i
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found him tired and disturbed.
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, to conclude that it is a worth to have in
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well organised
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manner which
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a new joy, energy to
work
and inspiration to others to
work
properly and organising.
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it is
the
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good sign of discipline for office employee and house member.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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