Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it compared with other drugs.  To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

Tobacco

is definitely a

drug

unfortunately many

people

are free to

use

it

however

some

people

think it should be illegal. I believe that

consumption

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of

tobacco

In any

the

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form should be prohibited. To support my opinion, I shall put some arguments below.

To begin

with, the number of

people

who are addicted to smoking is gradually increasing with the passage of time.

This

may be

due to

the easy availability of

this

cancer everywhere. Especially,

teenager

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smokers tend to

higher

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be higher

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than ever before.

For example

, in a recent survey in the USA about 60% school

going

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kids have confirmed addiction. I personally think anything that can harm your body is a

drug

and

tobacco

is

in

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one of them.

Tobacco

not only affects the person who is smoking(active smoker) but

also

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affects

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the person (passive smoker)who is sitting next to him.

Tobacco

cigarettes can cause COPD, carcinoma and oral cancer.

People

and free to

use

tobacco

because of the lack of rules and

regulation

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regulations

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.

Government

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The government

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must prohibit the

use

or even growth of

tobacco

. Rulers must have a strict policy regarding it. The

use

of

tobacco

smoking in a public place should be illegal. Any

drug

abuse can not be defended because

drug

abuser

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impacts apply

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society.

For example

, many

drug

user may turn to crime to meet the increasing

the

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expense of their habit. There should be school base

tobacco

and smoking cessation

programmers

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programs

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which help us to keep our youth away from

this

cancer.

Similarly

, there should be restrictions on the sale of

tobacco

at local shops.

To sum up

,

due to

the adverse

effect

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effects

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of smoking on the human body, the government must interfere and prohibit the growth and sale of

this

abusive

drug

.