Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it compared with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?

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is definitely a

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unfortunately many

people

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are free to

use

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it

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some

people

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think it should be illegal. I believe that

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of

tobacco

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In any

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form should be prohibited. To support my opinion, I shall put some arguments below.

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with, the number of

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who are addicted to smoking is gradually increasing with the passage of time.

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may be

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the easy availability of

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cancer everywhere. Especially,

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smokers tend to

higher

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than ever before.

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, in a recent survey in the USA about 60% school

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kids have confirmed addiction. I personally think anything that can harm your body is a

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and

tobacco

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is

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one of them.

Tobacco

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not only affects the person who is smoking(active smoker) but

also

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the person (passive smoker)who is sitting next to him.

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cigarettes can cause COPD, carcinoma and oral cancer.

People

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and free to

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tobacco

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because of the lack of rules and

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regulations

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.

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The government

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must prohibit the

use

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or even growth of

tobacco

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. Rulers must have a strict policy regarding it. The

use

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of

tobacco

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smoking in a public place should be illegal. Any

drug

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abuse can not be defended because

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abuser

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impacts apply

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society.

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, many

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user may turn to crime to meet the increasing

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expense of their habit. There should be school base

tobacco

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and smoking cessation

programmers

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which help us to keep our youth away from

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cancer.

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, there should be restrictions on the sale of

tobacco

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at local shops.

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,

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the adverse

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effects

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of smoking on the human body, the government must interfere and prohibit the growth and sale of

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abusive

drug

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.