Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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some people prefer to have
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who always have the same
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as them, Others are in favour of having
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, who on occasions differ
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them in their
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. In my opinion, It is perfectly fine to have
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, who do not concur with our beliefs sometimes. On the one hand, if our
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wishers have
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views
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us, we tend to get carried away without any introspection and may fail to check if those are valid.
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, My
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says that it is not essential
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be honest all the time, and I am
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of the same view,
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we get along very well but
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an unwelcome behaviour and
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result of
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trait we might suffer together.
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, It is
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human right to have independent
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points that could differ from others.
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, if a pal is open-minded and willing to correct his/her
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friends
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views
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in case they are wrong
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he should be considered a true
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. A person is judged by the
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he/she has.
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, No two Individuals are alike in all respects.
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, Their habits, skills and
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could be different and it is natural for a society to be
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way and
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thing is applicable to friendship as well. In conclusion, It is undoubtedly advantageous to have a
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well
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wisher or
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who at times tend to disagree with us for
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reasons.
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will ensure that we live in a healthier society where Individuals respect one another despite their differing opinions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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