2.Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some argue that
countries
can be economically benefited and can also
have a healthy environment
while
others believe that it is impossible to possess these aspects as it's not compatible.Although
, it is not easy to maintain the balance between the economy
and the environs
.I believe most of the nation is economically strong and Replace the word
environment
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one
hand , Some people insist that these two ideas are not realistic, because Correct article usage
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apply
countries
having a strong economical
background can be laid for having a spoiled Correct word choice
economic
environment
.However
, as per the World Economic records from the University of Australia, it is noticeable that most of the nations are facing challenges in terms of creating a better environment
. For instance
, China is leading in second place for holding the strongest economy
but to see the darker side it has a spoiled environment
and as the government is aware of it there are no major actions taken on it . Thus
it is understandable for people to argue about
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On the other hand
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has
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environment
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country has achieved its goal
In conclusion, despite the fact that some nations are unable to maintain the balance between nature and the countries
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country's
countries'
economy
both developing and developed countries
needs
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need
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effective and different approach to maintain the Change the article
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