Some people say that e-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

The latest technological advancement and digital books may take over the conventional newspapers and magazines. In my opinion, I strongly disagree
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view because the poor network connections and lack of technical expertise of the public would minimise the chance to happen
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in the foreseeable future.
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, the availability of network connections to the entire world is minimal.
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, to read newspapers and watch television,
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fast and efficient connectivity is extremely necessary;
however
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parts of the world still the availability is impossible.
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, even though India is a massive hub of internet users, most of them have been encountering the issue of poor network signals during their usage. Due to
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, their usage limited to listening to radios or checking their social
media
updates rather than reading online news and other magazines.
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skills
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necessary to have in order to use electronic
media
in their day to day life. Many news channels and publications have their own applications to generate their content that may be complicated to use for
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since they are poorly equipped with
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nuances of the digital platform.Eventually, the users hesitate to incorporate
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complicated digital
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their daily life and rarely going to happen anytime in the near future. The complexity can be usually seen while using newspapers apps of
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magazines and
media
such
as the Hindu and BBC. In conclusion,
although
it has been noticed that overall the internet customers
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been increased hugely, I hardly think that it would replace the traditional way of
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reading or magazine subscription.
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is because of the slow networks and insufficient technical skills to use these highly complicated applications.
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