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Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry ...)can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is considered by some that
art
such
 as painting music and poetry can be made by everyone while there are
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 who think it can only be done by those with special talents of it. In my opinion, I agree that everyone can make
art
 depending on their level of
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diligent
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 towards the act .
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 the
one
 hand,
although
, some
people
 believe that
art
 can be done by everyone and I agree. We
people
 believe that the act of
art
 can be done by anyone if he or she put
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a lot
lot
 of hard work into place towards it .
in other words
, practice
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 perfect.
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 a lot of
people
 go to school just to learn different types of
art
 and with
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effort
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 they become perfect and professionals in the field without having any inbuilt talent on it before .
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 the other hand,some
people
 believe that special talent is needed before
one
 can perfect
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any form of
art
. They think that without
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 talent
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art
one
 can not be
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art
 professional.
Furthermore
, they believe that
people
 with special talents
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art
 are the only expert in the field of
art
. In conclusion, many
people
 have various options related to those that can make
art
 but I believe that
art
 is something that can be done by anybody if effort
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 put into place to make it perfect.
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