Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry ...)can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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as painting music and poetry can be made by everyone while there are
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who think it can only be done by those with special talents of it. In my opinion, I agree that everyone can make
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depending on their level of
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, some
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believe that
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can be done by everyone and I agree. We
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believe that the act of
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can be done by anyone if he or she put
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a lot
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perfect.
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a lot of
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go to school just to learn different types of
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and with
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effort
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they become perfect and professionals in the field without having any inbuilt talent on it before .
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the other hand,some
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believe that special talent is needed before
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can perfect
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any form of
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. They think that without
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talent
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can not be
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professional.
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, they believe that
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with special talents
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are the only expert in the field of
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. In conclusion, many
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have various options related to those that can make
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but I believe that
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is something that can be done by anybody if effort
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put into place to make it perfect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Extraordinary skill
  • Inclusive
  • Therapeutic aspects
  • Democratized
  • Accessible
  • Quality and profundity
  • Inherent talent
  • Saturation of mediocre works
  • Artistic activities
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