There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: - describe the problems - explain how these broblems are affecting the public - suggest what changes could be made

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in order to complain about the situation with transport facilities in our area.
First
of all, the buses don'
t
follow their timetable, even sometimes people are waiting for it and it doesn'
t
arrive on time. The
next
issue is that drivers don'
t
have enough cash to sell tickets. What is more, it starts to be dangerous at
nights
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to use them. Due to these ,problems a lot's of my neighbours and I are being late for work in the mornings, because we count our time and how we need it to arrive at work. There were few moments when I couldn'
t
even enter the bus, because it was overfull and I need to wait for the
next
about 20 minutes,
although
there should be a
second
one in a few minutes later. If we discuss
furthermore
cases, I would like to tell you that negotiations with drivers are a very big deal. I don'
t
know why they tell us about problems with money, but I believe you should take attention to it. And
also
there are problems when we use transport late at night. It follows that you need to have some decisions how to to it better mostly with my
last
mentioned problem, there are can be set up cameras inside vehicles to feel more confident. What is more there are should be people who will check buses as clients to improve service. And
last
but not least you should introduce new staff positions like a person who would follow the timetable and buses movements. Thank you in advance for your kind cooperation. We would like to make our area much better. Yours faithfully, Maria
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