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Some governments say how many children a family can hare in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometime necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays,
population
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 is increasing at
alarming
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an alarming
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 rate and
government
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the government
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 is introducing
taxes
 to control the elevating
population
 in their nation.In my opinion,
this
 is the inevitable problem and by collecting
taxes
government
 is using necessary as well as correct method to control the elevating
population
. A good reason to introduce the
taxes
 is that people realize more when they are
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affected
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effected
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affected
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 in monetary terms.
This
 will compel individuals to pay more attention
towards
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 the law and consider family planning as
vital
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 part of their life.They will opt for contraceptive methods to avoid
taxes
 and
this
 will
also
decreases
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 health problems like STD. Another reason to consider is that
taxes
 collected from people for having more children are used by
government
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the government
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 for the benefit of their own nation.
For instance
, the money collected can be used in
health
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the health
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 care department and education which is directly going to help the humans of their own country.It will
also
 improve the lifestyle of people.
Finally
, it is
also
 the duty of
government
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the government
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 to save the resources of
country
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the country
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 and use them wisely.In underdeveloping
conutries
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countries
 like
India
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,India
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 the whole burden is on the shoulder of
government
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the government
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 to meet the demands of exploding
population
.
Government
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The government
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 have to provide housing, food as well as jobs for everyone.
Therefore
, if the
taxes
 are applied state can utilise
there
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taxes
 to tackle
with
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the expenses and
fulfill
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 the requirement of
rising
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the rising
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population
. In conclusion,
growing
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the growing
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population
 by
heaps
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leaps
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 and bounds is causing various obstacles in the progress of
nation
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the nation
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.
Therefore
, applying
taxes
 by the ruling authority is
necessary
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the necessary
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 and
right
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the right
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 way to hinder
population
 overgrowth.
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