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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with a friend. He/She has just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank him/her for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you

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Dear Jessie, I’ve just received those photographs shared by you on google drive from our previous month’s outing at Darjeeling in our neighbouring country. Thanks a lot for organizing the trip and taking
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 off from your new job.
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 in some
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 my face got blurred a little bit, the picturesque view of the rock garden is simply awesome. I have been watching those
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 a day since I got those from you. You know, I have to manage my employment and my family at a
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 so I couldn’t able to write earlier.
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,
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 week I had to work on a crucial project which took the majority of my
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, and my husband was in a seasonal fever and I had to look after him. I’d like to request you if you can visit my residence for few days. I’d be more than happy if you could join us at my birthday party
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 month. I am planning to invite all of our companions to that program because we don’t meet each other for long. I look forward to hearing from you soon, Keep in touch, Sahara
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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