Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There has always been a debate on whether to accept a bad situation and let it pass or to
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towards improving it. In my opinion, in most
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and effort can help subside challenging times but there are scenarios where it is very difficult to stay hopeful. There are often phases where we face difficult
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be it personal, professional or financial but trying to overcome these with gritty and never give up
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attitude
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, in case of a professional problem or unsatisfactory job, the best way is to have a discussion with your manager or acquire new skills to get a better
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profile.
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, if the problem is related to money shortage or financial instability,
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way to overcome is to talk to your family or friends for assistance.
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easier said than done for some people who live in very troublesome
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, there are areas of the world where people are unable to get access to even a single meal in a day because of poverty and insufficient resources.
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, in
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like India, nearly 50% of the population still
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don't
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over their head. It is very difficult to stay optimistic under
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reeling conditions and people understandably just accept these
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and continue living a life full of hardships and challenges.
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scenarios implicate that sometimes even efforts or hard
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doesnt
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doesn't
resolve the situation. In conclusion,
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we can overcome most of the
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situations
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with adequate efforts or even communication, yet, sometimes problems can be too overwhelming for a person to fix even with constant hard
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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