In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the ultramodern epoch, it is a point of debate that now we are living in the 21st century and the world is growing in technology. So in the
,
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future everyone will read on the
internet
. Undoubtedly,
this
notion remains successful in keeping the majority in its favour. The upcoming paragraph would cast light on my argument related to the very conception. I wholeheartedly concur with the statement that in the modern era some industry developing rapidly and they are a lot of using natural source. Most of the company use wood for produced paper and making
this
paper it is cost very high. So when after made
this
paper launch in the market it will be so expensive. Many
people
would not like to buy so expensive books. In simple word, paper-based book, magazine and newspaper are very costly for reading. To add a few more reasons, how can one forgets about the
internet
has approaching very fast in every area and everyone can get knowledge from the
internet
. To justify the same, there is the epitome of
internet
source is very affordable for the individual even it is very useful for the
people
who have not timed for to buy newspaper and magazine.
Last
but not least, numerous individual travelling in public transport like bus and train. In some country, public transport does not provide the magazine and newspaper
then
what will do
people
for getting news and some.
Then
people
will get news from
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google. On the final note, I am of the opinion that
people
will definitely interest in the
internet
because it is easy the source to get information.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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