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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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In the ultramodern epoch, it is a point of debate that now we are living in the 21st century and the world is growing in technology. So in the
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future everyone will read on the
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 notion remains successful in keeping the majority in its favour. The upcoming paragraph would cast light on my argument related to the very conception. I wholeheartedly concur with the statement that in the modern era some industry developing rapidly and they are a lot of using natural source. Most of the company use wood for produced paper and making
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 paper it is cost very high. So when after made
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 paper launch in the market it will be so expensive. Many
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 would not like to buy so expensive books. In simple word, paper-based book, magazine and newspaper are very costly for reading. To add a few more reasons, how can one forgets about the
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 has approaching very fast in every area and everyone can get knowledge from the
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. To justify the same, there is the epitome of
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 source is very affordable for the individual even it is very useful for the
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 who have not timed for to buy newspaper and magazine.
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 but not least, numerous individual travelling in public transport like bus and train. In some country, public transport does not provide the magazine and newspaper
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 for getting news and some.
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google. On the final note, I am of the opinion that
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 because it is easy the source to get information.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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