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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays we can see a forecast that all
books
 and newspapers tend to exist only in virtual and non-payable form rather than to be published on
paper
 and
then
 bought. I strongly believe that online forms of
news
 and
books
 will replace hard copies completely due to their ineffectiveness.
First
 of all, the prediction of not using
paper
books
 or newspapers is based on the costs that are being spent on the production and distribution of hard copies of
such
 documents since they are foremost the products for sale to customers. Publishing companies need to invest money in the infrastructure to produce and deliver the content. In the case of digital ones,
such
 expenditures become much less because online publication does not imply those costs. For the same reason, we can see in respect of consumers who are willing to spend less money for a subscription to online libraries or newspapers as compared to buying the printed ones. The other point is connected with the fact that consumers are interested in quick access to
news
 published online and their commenting
instead
 of wasting time on buying
paper
 versions of them. Telling a story today means looking at articles together with social context and the opportunities to make commentaries in social media immediately after the reeding of publication. Nobody wants to waste more than a
second
 to upload articles or
books
 and particularly
such
 a long time on waiting and buying
paper
books
 or tabloids, which do not allow to express opinions and thoughts and share them with other people.
Besides
, the most general
news
 and information are available for free and most consumers do not require access to the payable content and consider it redundant. In conclusion, I am sure that the future of
news
 and
books
 are laid in the online existence since looking on the smartphones will satisfy the needs for information due to the cost of the digital version of contents and ability to get quick access to it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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