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some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product or service. do you agree or disagree.

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Few people look for the
price
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 before getting the product or the service rather than quality. In my opinion, it has its own benefits and drawbacks which I would like to discuss
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them in the following paragraphs.
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, I wouldn't say it is necessarily true. Many people from the
middle class
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 background, will use the
money
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 based on their budget plans to save the
money
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 for
the
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future purpose.
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, they will spend their
money
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 and because of
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reason
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 they will observe the
price
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 compare to its attributes.
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 it is good to put aside for future we must expend
good
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 amount of
money
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 on our requirements.
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, if we get
a goods
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 based on its
price
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 and as its
price
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 is less, its quality will
be low
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.
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, it works only for
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 and later on it will be malfunctioned where we need to invest again. In the same way, if we consider poor grade services
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 example, medical facilities
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 our life will be in danger if anything goes wrong. So, I think
best
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 way to buy a product or a service is that we must observe its
characterstics
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characteristics
 as in most
of
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the
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cases it will be a
life time
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lifetime
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 investment. Discussing
about
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the drawbacks, youth are getting more fascinated
towards
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 many things especially electrical goods that to only top brands and buying them without analyzing whether they need them or not. Not only that, they are squandering on the services like spa, celebrating grand and splendid weddings, birthday parties. In
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 cases, we have many alternatives like we can acquire similar kind of products and get same services for
low
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price
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 if we ignore its characteristics where we can save
money
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, they provide
a
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temporary happiness it is just a wastage of
money
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. To sum up, I would tend to agree that we must consider the aspects of the products than giving more importance to
money
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however
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, it implies
for
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our requirements only. When we aspire to buy somethings which is not crucial, in
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price
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