These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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education is key to ensure a brighter future for the

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, schools have noticed that

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people have a desire to become

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. High schools have noticed a shortage of

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applying for positions. In

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problem and offer solutions

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can be used to overcome

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problem.

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are vital in the education system to ensure that

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is considered a low paid job.

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preparing for their classes ensuring that their students are well equipped for

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exams so that they can progress to the

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level in their education, but

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often don't get paid compensation for their extra hours.

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, a lot of children and teenagers sometimes disrespect their

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and don't follow the class rules which could lead to depression and an unpleasant

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environment for the

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could contribute to

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feeling unvalued at their school of employment.

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the educators would feel recognised and valued for their hard

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should be able to approach the principal or a

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behaviour together with the

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who feels appreciated would contribute to a more pleasant

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environment. In conclusion,

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play an important role in an upbringing of a

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educatate

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educate

children in the future.

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These days, in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Fully explain your ideas

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Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disanvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars.  Why is this happening?   Is it a positive or negative development?