The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that people living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems

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due to advancement in technology, urban areas are growing rapidly in terms of infrastructure and Business-wise.
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, the development is causing issues related to the environment as well as mental and physical
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. The essay aims to discuss
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issues and provide the solution to resolve them. Nowadays, due to the construction of subways, trams and buses, transportation is easily available from anywhere.
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, it has
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become fast and reliable than before, which has made the lives of humans easy. People have to walk less now which makes their commute relaxing. Because of
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, they have started becoming obese, as there is no physical activity which can help them burn some calories. So in order to solve
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, the government should promote physical exercises by encouraging people to walk more or use cycles to cut small distances.
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, people come to big cities for job opportunities. Due to
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fast life, there is less time to relax as everyone running towards achieving their future goals.
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has affected the mental health of a person due to deprivation of sleep and increasing stress level, which leads to various
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as increased blood pressure, heart
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etc. There are various mind control exercises
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as Yoga, deep breathing, meditation that can help overcome
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problems
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. To be concluded, with the growth of cities there is a rise in the
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as well. But to control the problem, various measures need to be taken. By right education and
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these
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can be resolved.
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