Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources such as the internet, television. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with their opinion?

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get more knowledge from
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with
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than from other
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as the internet or television. It is indisputable that
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might pay more attention in live classes than
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by themselves.
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in every school or university are taught by
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or professors because they are qualified and specialized in each lesson.
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directly when they have questions, while
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their own
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to understand the
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in live classes.
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majoring in theory; thereby, the outer resources
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or television contain a variety of knowledge and it might broader
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of children.
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can research up-to-date information on Google for their interest topics.
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, cartoons, movies or
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not have in theory books or academic classes. In conclusion, there are some benefits in both
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studying with
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and learning from outer
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. In my opinion, I agreed that
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might learn far more from
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but I
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think that schools should concern about outer
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study and let children learn by themselves.
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  • immediate feedback
  • structured learning
  • curriculum
  • dynamic interaction
  • engagement
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