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Some people believe that speaking is best way of communicating while others believe in writing. Do you agree or disagree

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It is often believed by
people
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 that communicating in
person
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 has a better impact than the one created by writing. Even I strongly believe that it is always worthwhile to have a one on one talk to convey important
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 in the best possible way. There are four reasons to substantiate my point of view to the given statement.
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 with, when we talk to a
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 or a group of
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 on their face, it helps us understand their reaction in the
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 place. To be clear, the expressions which are invoked by listening to someone in
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personal communication
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 gives the best feedback to the speaker. Another point to be considered here is that while talking in
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,
people
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 usually speak the truth and do not conceal anything. To give an example, when my boss asked me about my leaves, I revealed the truth and he was satisfied that I was not lying as he could judge me
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 and there itself.
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,
people
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 are able to clear all doubts at the same time which saves a lot of valuable time and energy. To cite an example, my cousins who had a group discussion about booking a movie ticket,
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 able to clarify all points and came to a conclusion at the earliest.
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, it improves human relationships by increasing interactions. To elaborate
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,
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 can judge others and identify traits while talking to each other in
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.
This
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 helps to build confidence in their relationship and there is no place for any misunderstanding. To conclude, after having a glance at the above explanation, I truly believe that it carries more weightage to talking in
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 and will help to build
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 foundation
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human relationships.
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