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Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree?

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The metro transport services have increasingly become popular in all the urban areas.most people have an option to use public transport to avoid traffics and physical stress.I completely agreed that metro train travel is very comfortable to ride around the town.
This
 essay will discuss why rail line is more advantageous to get around a city.
Firstly
,many of them having own vehicle to drive around the cities which are creating more traffic jams and accident on the road.
In addition
 to that, if an accident happens person should wait for the police certificates in order to claim the insurance for the repair.For ,example one private channel recently conducted the survey with the group of community who ever have own vehicle and reported that many of them replied that they are spending more time on the road because of accident and finding the parking space for the car,specifically in the shopping malls and theatres.whereas public transportation is the best option to reach out to the places on time they, added in the survey.
Secondly
, most individuals are using their own vehicle to go to the office every day and some of them driving for more than one hour in and out,because of that they are exhausted after the journey.
consequently
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 crowd are started thinking to use public buses and railway /electric train while outing with their family.
For instance
,one famous newspaper survey says that travelling by buses and trains are kept on increasing nowadays because within the time limit people can arrive at their destination and no physical stress. In my conclusion, I absolutely believe that public commuter services
such
 as bus, train, metro,tram are quite cheap and convenient to reach out the desire destinations without any physical activity.Even though there are many connectivities,Federal authority makes some plans to develop new subway line so that people can access all the places easily,
on the other hand
, the government can
also
 earn money.
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