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With recent developments in technology like Ebooks,some people feel that printed media like Ebooks,newspapers,and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is you opinion?

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 of technology has transformed
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 and platform of working that has led to the emergence of several novel formats,
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 of the most prominent is the
Ebooks
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. I strongly opine that printed media like
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,newspapers will disappear in the future and it will
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definitely
 become the thing of past. To initiate with, Ebooka
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 gaining momentum
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day by day
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. People are aware
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usage
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 of technology and they are using it in an effective manner because it has become the part and parcel of everyone's life since
Ebooks
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 are more convenient than printed
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,newspapers and magazines
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as a result
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this
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 will save
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 money and easy to read.
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 to
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, sometimes we don't get the specific book from the market so we can easily download that particular book from the internet
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 person can easily read it at any time.
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, many
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 are available on the internet
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 can check that book and can download
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 paying any cost. Individuals can easily read it while commuting. Moving
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the environment
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 will become more eco-friendly by using
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. Deforestation is upsurging nowadays and the effects are very harsh.
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,
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 can become the victim of many health disorders.
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 play a significant role ad
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 will come in his comfort zone. No plants and trees will be degraded by the usage of
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.
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,
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 will save the plants and trees from which paper is
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prepared
. To exemplify, after schooling many students
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 their
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 and notebooks which pollutes the
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environment
. If they will use
Ebooks
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 that will be more comfortable and no natural resource will get wasted. To summarise,
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 many people think that printed media will never disappear,
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 we cannot neglect the benefits of using
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 and I believe that
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 should be aware
about
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of
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if
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of
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ebooks
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 as
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is
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morw
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more
 convenient than printed media.

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