Some experts believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Most of the

people

were smoking in public

places

like shopping malls, Movie theatres, and

in

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Public vehicles. So the

government

introduced a law,

smoking

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that smoking

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is injurious to

health

and

people

who

are

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smoking in public

places

will be punished critically.

Although

I will disagree with

this

statement. Recently, the Anti-Smoking

committee

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did a survey on

people

who are smoking, Nearly 30% of

people

smoke every day in Public

places

.

While

people

smoking in public

places

was disturbing the other masses.

However

, smoking is legal in our country. But smoking in public

places

were

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illegal and

caused

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causes

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health

problems

to

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the public

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also

, masses who breathe cigarette smoke will

also

spoil their

health

conditions.

For instance

, my uncle smokes a lot every day. It impacts my aunt's

health

also

now she has one lung problem

due to

breathing cigarette smoke every day. Of course, it's not an act of snatching the smoker's freedom,it's an act of controlling smokers. The

government

started advertising the causes of smoking in

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Movie theatres and everywhere.

But

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the

government

was not taking any complete action against banning

the

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tobacco

due to

a

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the

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lot of income it was generating from

the

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tobacco.

Although

the

government

was taking safety measures to keep the public safe every moment.

To conclude

, In my opinion, the

government

took

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a

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the

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write decision banning tobacco in Public

places

will be beneficial to

so

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many masses.

However

, some

people

think that the

government

is snatching their freedom but

its

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it's

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incorrect.

While they

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They

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don't know that the

government

is taking care of them and

the

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society.