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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. Do you agree or disagree?

#children #school #teachers #influence #parents #development
I disagree with the statement and believe that both the
parents
 and the
teachers
 have the same amount of influence on the intellectual and social development of
a
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children
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children
.
Children
needs
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 support from both
parents
 and teacher to grow his intellectual and social manners. I upcoming paragraph will support my view. A
children
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child
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is
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are
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future
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the future
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 of
tommorow
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tomorrow
 and
needs
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need
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 full attention from its
parents
 and
teachers
.
The primary
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Primary
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 school is
cital
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vital
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 role a
childern's
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children's
children
 mental and social development
,
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 because a child
spend
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 8 to 9 hours in a school of a day. So, it is the responsibility of a teacher to watch them carefully and teach them good manners.
For instance
, in Japan
teachers
 are teaching
children
 common
sence
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sense
 before giving them from the book.
As a result
,
children
 learn how to behave
nice
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nicely
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 in the
socity
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society
.
On the other hand
,
parents
also
 play a massive role in the social and mental growth of
a
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children
a child
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children
.
Children
 learn from what they see, so, it is
a
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the
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 duty of
parents
 to show them their good
behievour
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behaviour
believer
 and be an example of how to respect elders and how to
behieve
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believe
behave
 in the
outerworld
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outer world
.
In addition
 to
this
,
parents
 should
also
 watch their
childern's
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children's
possitive
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positive
 and
negetive
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negative
 points and share it with
teachers
 and work together to try to vanish
negetive
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negative
 polish positive points of their
children
. ' In
conculation
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conclusion
consultation
, I would
to
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say that it is nessasery for both the
parents
amd
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and
 the teacher to work together to teach
children
 good book
knowlwdge
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knowledge
 and social
knowlewdge
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knowledge
.
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