Plastic shopping bags contributie to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is an irrefutable fact that the environment is getting degraded day by day due to humans daily habits.There are many different schools of thought about banning
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bags .
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, there are many other reasons for water and
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pollution,
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I think that the most common root cause of polluting these two resources is
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.In my opinion, I support the idea of banning
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bags.I will discuss
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in my upcoming paragraphs. The
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and foremost reason for abolishing the use of
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bag is that
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is affecting the ecosystem.When
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is not decomposed for years,
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it is thrown into water bodies like oceans and rivers where they are ingested by marine life which, ultimately leads to their death.Recent research has provided evidence that
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ingestion by fishes is found as a cause of death.After analysing
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it can be interpreted that the earth is
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losing its biodiversity. The
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point worth mentioning is that
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reduces the fertility of the
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which will, unfortunately, reduce food production.When
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is thrown on the ground and it is non-biodegradable waste, so it does not get degraded by the bacterias in the
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and remain in the
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forever.
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reduces the fertility of the
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by producing various chemicals in the
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and affecting the flora and fauna of the
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.Due to which agriculture is suffering and the amount harvested is reduced.
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, there are many biodegradable substitutes of
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that can be used for shopping. In conclusion, it is vital to conserve natural resources and for ,
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it is important that harmful substances like
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should be kept away from them.Government should use qualitative as well as quantitative approach to tackle
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problem and reduce pollution caused by
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bags.
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