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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.

#punishment #death #penalty #lives #crimes #violence #control #society
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The
crime
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rate
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 is rapidly increasing Globally day by day, some individuals think that
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to minimize the
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 is by sentencing them by lengthy jail term to convict. Whereas another opinion that other procedures to demolish the
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rate
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 is better.After enlightening both the view I am thinking that sentencing them for a longer period is the best way to reduce the
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crime
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 is a serious offence which can destroy one's life , They should be published by hard punishment for the convict to set an example for others who are aiming to commit an act against the law,
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 if they are separated for a long time from society, the repetition of
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 action will reduce .
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, in our ,country the rapists are committing rape rapidly became the punishment against the are truly less, they are punished for five to six-year only in
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 contrast court should sentence these convicts for life imprisonment to reduce the rape cases .
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 crimes like robbery , pickpockets and many more , these crimes were done under some circumstances like unemployment , under poverty. To restrict
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 offence government should give wage to them
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 U.S government do or give them vocational training to earn their livelihood , take regular feedback that they are doing the job or not. In conclusion,
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 is a punishable act, convicts should sentence to life imprisonment so that they can set an example not to repeat any act against law. In
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 in society.
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