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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the south pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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One
 of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of believing that it is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural
environments
,
such
 as the south pole. There
ia
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is
 a widespread worry that
this
 will only lead to a myriad of concerns in
one
's life.
However
, I do not entirely accept
this
 and I will explain why in
this
 essay. There
are
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number
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 of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant
one
 is that the
people
 to travel to remote natural
enviroments
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environments
environment
 in recent time can not contribute to the younger
people
 going to for relaxation and
also
 they want to the different
wheather
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weather
 for self. Some
people
 learn more about the discovery in the travelling time. The
naturel
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natural
nature
 climate
are give
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 many things in life. There are
however
, some pitfalls
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 easily overwhelm the potential benefits of the natural
environments
. The primary
one
 stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend,
people
 had not only realised its gravity
,
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 but
also
 gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it's come to today,s ever-changing lifestyle.
Hence
, it is apparent why many are against
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travelling to remote natural
environments
such
 as the south pole. In view of the arguments outlined above,
one
 can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of increasing
environments
 are indeed too great to ignore.
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